Because of the scene changes it works very well in three chapter. Your a very excellent writer, and I enjoy reading your insights into these characters.
Author's Response: Thanks. I really enjoy getting into the characters' heads and try to figure out why they do the things they do and say the things they say. It's a real lot of fun, and I'm absolutely thrilled you like it. Thanks for the review.
Wow. That was awesome. Only word for it. I definitely cried on that last chapter. It was just so wonderful that Sam brought Dean to the Grand Canyon... I knew it was coming, and it was just perfect. I've always wondered if Sam will do that in the show eventually. It would be just like him to remember, as you said, that little off-hand comment. Anyway, not many stories make me cry, so, excellent job. I loved it. :)
Author's Response:Wow, thanks. Actually making people cry is never what I intend, but I guess in this case I'll take it as a compliment. So thanks for that. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
And yeah, I'd absolutely love to see Sam remember that offhand remark and take Dean to the Grand Canyon at one point on the actual show. It would be one of those small things that would make me love the show even more than I do now.
Thanks for the awesome review!
Aww, this conversation was perfect! I love your details and scenery, and Sam's sneaky ways to get Dean to the Grand Canyon.
Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks a lot for the reviews.
Nice conversation - I like how Dean has finally decided to share for real.
Your Dean voice is brilliant in here. I absolutely love how you are able to get into the characters' heads, and what you've done with John. I'm curious why he was so reluctant to touch Dean (and if it was actually John, obviously).
Also, I like Sam's helicoper-line - nice use of canon details.
Author's Response:Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the story so far, and telling me that the voices rang true for you is the best compliment I can get :D
I don't know if all your questions will be answered, some things I left deliberately vague in this story. But you'l see. Thanks a lot for the review.
A very beautiful story! Loved it! Sad to see it ending here....
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. But yeah, unfortunately this is the ending. But there will be other stories, that I'm sure of. Thanks for the review.
wow - loved it! the ambiguity over john's 'reality', and i really think it worked well in chapters; there was enough angst and hurt and more angst and did i mention the hurt? - that a bit of a break was all to thegood.
fantastic read, thanks!
cal
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review! Looking back on it, I think that the way I was forced to break it up indeed works out quite good. I'm glad you liked it, it was the first time I've ever really written John, so it was a bit of unknown waters for me. Thanks a lot.
that's the ending that I always wanted for the brothers:both of them at the Canyon with beers on their hands,perfect!thanks for this story
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.
he's such a stubborn lol
thank god sammy was there and he didn't fell!he's in so much pain and he doesn't need anything more
I like the way in which you're writing this story,especially the conversations and the jokes between the dean and sam
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I'm really glad this story is working out for you so far. Thanks for the review.
that was really well done. I hope that they have some sort of scene like the one you had at the ending in the show...they definitely need it. Well written good job
Author's Response: Thanks. I love those brotherly moments too. They definitely need more of those on the show. Thanks for the review, glad you like it.
I always like stories which involve jhon,this first chapter is great!john is totally right and dean should understand it
Author's Response: Thanks. It's been the first time for me to write John, so I was jumping into the deep end here. Glad it worked out for you so far, thanks for the review.
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